You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: • Why you cannot pay the rent • When you will pay the rent. How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future

Dear Mr John I am writing a letter to send my
apologise
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apologies
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for l am possible to pay my
this
month's
rent
some later. You know that I bought a new car
last
week. At that time I had borrowed so much money from my friend Jhop. I had promised that I
will
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would
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give back it in a week. So, he asked
his
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for his
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money yesterday. I have to return him
instead
pay to
rent
. But you must believe me I will pay
to
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for to
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house
this
Saturday. Because I find a job for myself. And
following
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the following
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Friday my boss will give me much more money. I can pay my
rent
that
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for that
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. If I can not do it, you will bring my car for
rent
. I suppose it would not be that. Until Saturday if you want, you
may
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can
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bring my car of course. I promise you will bring PAYMENT on Saturday. I look forward to your admission. Yours truly
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task achievement
To improve task response, provide clearer details on how you will ensure future payments consistently, to fully address the prompt.
coherence and cohesion
Enhancing coherence can be achieved by using more structured paragraphing and logical connectors.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is essential in formal letter writing.
complete response
It addresses all parts of the task, mentioning the reasons for the delay and when and how the rent will be paid.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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