The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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However
, the number decreases sharply to 42,2% in the age
from 25 to 34, and a drop at approximately 3% to 39,5% in the middle age
group, 35 to 44. At older stages of life, the percentage is likely to increase and then
stand at 46,7% to describe the 65 and older group.
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