It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behivour to children?

Positive and negative feedbacks have to be implemented in young people in order to show them the importance of having appropriate behaviours and the consequences of having those that are

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inappropriate

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, I staunchly believe that

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and youngsters should be rewarded and punished

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their performances, respectively. In

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essay, I will explain my reasons in detail and how the

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professors

and parents should manage the

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. To start with, teachers and parents are considered authority figures who should be respected by humankind.

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, they are in

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of teaching not only

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but adolescents all manners, ethics, and values which should be fulfilled in order to be part of

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society.

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of

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, many debates have been carried out to establish the proper education people should receive

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whether

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are required from

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ages

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,

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psychologists

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and sociologists have proved that the most crucial range of age for teaching

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behaviours

and patterns is between 1 and 5 years old because of the development of the brain.

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, some penalties should be implemented as a way to show the impact

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bad actions.

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, types of

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to be performed among schools and households have been set by

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governments

government

in order to establish boundaries and avoid severe actions.

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,

it is clear that

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not only physical but

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pyshological

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psychological

violence

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forbidden.

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, in case of

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punishments

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as a unique way of teaching, they have to be proportional to the age and the action that was committed.

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, parents could restrict the usage of technological devices or social

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, or

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cannot stay outside with their

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unless they accomplish all

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.

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,

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professors

should implement community service

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those who have no respect and empathy.

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, it is well-known and it has been proved that

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should be taught from early stages to respect and follow the rules.

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, many characteristics should be taken into account to establish fair

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by teaching the importance of having proper behaviours.