Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

It is

development

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a development

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country

’s growth largely depends on how educated and healthy its citizens are . The burgeoning population and the lack of funds often make

harder

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it harder

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for the authority to bear the expenses of their needs , especially in

education

, housing and treatment. I believe that an effective solution would be to divide the expenditures between the

government

and the individuals.

To begin

with ,

education

, nowadays, plays a vital role in the development of society not only

created

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creating

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jobs

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opportunities

,

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but

also

help

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helping

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people become aware of the

Scion - economic

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socio-economic

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issue of the

country

.Making

education

free till the age of 18 would encourage the pupils to

finished

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their least secondary

education

.

For instance

, the percentage enrollment for school in 2023 in my

country

increased by 20% than that of 2022 , and it was because the

government

exempted fees for

student

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students

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in

these lesson

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this lesson

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.

Moreover

, the healthcare system can

also

be improve

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by providing either health insurance or schemes that cover a minimum of 50

percent

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per cent

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of

cost

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the cost

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.

Thus

people would not feel that healthcare is expensive

while

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and

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the

government

would not need to bear the expense alone . A healthier nation can help the

country

achieve greater heights as citizens in

such

countries are more productive.

Consequently

, the economic

growths

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growth

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bosltered

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bolstered

and the

government

would be able to

self- reliant

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self-reliant

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. In conclusion,

i

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I

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completely agree that all the

government

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governments

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in our world should have funds to support their people

that

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apply

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significant for

education

and healthcare

that

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so that

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the

country

will be more developing in future.