Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: •explain your travel plans •describe the interesting places you plan to visit •ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.
#friend #country #visit #holidays #•explain #travel #plans #•describe #places #plan #•ask #suggestions #options
Dear
mike
,
I hope all is well with you. I’m glad that Capitalize word
Mike
i
will be coming to visit your Change the capitalization
I
country
. I hear from angelica
you at be in your hometown.
First of all, if I go to my Capitalize word
Angelica
country
dont
forget me, someday I would Correct your spelling
don't
like
go Add the particle
like to
your
hometown. I saw on Change preposition
to your
news
many Correct article usage
the news
the
best Change preposition
of the
place
here, as it happens there are several events likeFix the agreement mistake
places
,
theatre, local drama, local music, and Remove the comma
apply
bazar
.
Correct your spelling
bazaar
moreover
, also
near from
the beach I Change preposition
to
gonna
surfing Verb problem
go
overthere
, Correct your spelling
over there
In addition
there are several the
best Change preposition
of the
waterfall
in my hometown if I stay Fix the agreement mistake
waterfalls
overhere
the cost is cheap.
Correct your spelling
here
Therefore
, i
am Change the capitalization
I
as
foreign do you Correct word choice
apply
want
guide me to travel in your Add the particle
want to
country
, only you my friend in your country
, I hope you do
not busy when I come Verb problem
are
in
your Change preposition
to
howetown
I looking forward Correct your spelling
hometown
seeing
you.Change preposition
to seeing
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your sentences are well-constructed and avoid run-on sentences. Break your ideas into separate paragraphs for better readability.
task achievement
Make sure to correct any grammatical errors and improve the accuracy of your vocabulary usage.
task achievement
Your enthusiasm for visiting and exploring the country is evident, which makes the letter engaging.
suitable writing tone
The personal tone throughout the letter adds warmth, making it feel friendly and genuine.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,