The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram here illustrates the steps of processing used glassware in order to reuse.
To summarise, these
glass
materials
goes
through seven consecutive steps, Change the verb form
go
such
as, recycle
bin, treatment plant, washing and sterilizing, crushing and melting, moulding and Wrong verb form
recycling
finally
deilvery
, in order for us to use Correct your spelling
delivery
again
.
The procedure starts with people discarding Correct pronoun usage
them again
materials
made out of glass
, such
as bottle
and Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
plate
, in a bin which is stamped with Fix the agreement mistake
plates
recycle
sign. From here, these Correct article usage
a recycle
materials
are collected by designated trucks for glass
recycling. It transports the glassware to the treatment plant.
Once in the treatment plant, the recycling process is kicked off with rinsing of these glass
materials
as well as
sterilizing them in machines such
as glass
bead sterilizer. In the next step, all the washed materials
are melted in a kiln and crushed under pressure in Correct article usage
a hydrolic
hydrolic
press. Once pressed, the molten Correct your spelling
hydraulic
glass
is poured into mould
by Correct article usage
a mould
boulding
machine to manufacture the final product. From here, these products are delivered to the shopping malls for the general public to use.Correct article usage
a boulding
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