The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram here illustrates the steps of processing used glassware in order to reuse. To summarise, these
glass
materials
goes
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go
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through seven consecutive steps,
such
as,
recycle
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recycling
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bin, treatment plant, washing and sterilizing, crushing and melting, moulding and
finally
deilvery
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delivery
, in order for us to use
again
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them again
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. The procedure starts with people discarding
materials
made out of
glass
,
such
as
bottle
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bottles
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and
plate
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plates
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, in a bin which is stamped with
recycle
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a recycle
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sign. From here, these
materials
are collected by designated trucks for
glass
recycling. It transports the glassware to the treatment plant. Once in the treatment plant, the recycling process is kicked off with rinsing of these
glass
materials
as well as
sterilizing them in machines
such
as
glass
bead sterilizer. In the next step, all the washed
materials
are melted in a kiln and crushed under pressure in
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a hydrolic
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hydrolic
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hydraulic
press. Once pressed, the molten
glass
is poured into
mould
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a mould
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by
boulding
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a boulding
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machine to manufacture the final product. From here, these products are delivered to the shopping malls for the general public to use.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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