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The table shows the results of a survey with given percentages in 3 different courses with 5 different categories

The table shows the results of a survey with given percentages in 3 different courses with 5 different categories
The table shows the results of a survey with given
percentages
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 in 3 different courses with 5 different categories Overview: there are 3 different courses
by
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 5 different rating aspects,
starts
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starting
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 from
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Pre
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Pre-course
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course
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, Teaching
quality
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,
tutor
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support
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,
Resources
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 (print) and
ends
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ending
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 with other
resources
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 Beginning with
first
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the first
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course
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 Economics And In
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Pre
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course
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 information it got 55% and on to next Teaching
quality
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 it received
95
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a 95
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% rating, upcoming on
Tutor
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support
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 with high
percentages
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 numbers with 92%,
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however
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 it set in motion on
printing
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the printing
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course
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 with 59%
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At
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 the end
on
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apply
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other
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obtain
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obtained
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with
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62%.
Second
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 in the Law results are
on
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mid range
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, starting
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Pre
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course
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 it acquired amount of 72%, following
om
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on
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quality
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 it got
lowest
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the lowest
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percentages
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 with 67%, on the
tutor
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support
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 79%, next on
Resources
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 (print) With 70%, on final in Other
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 with 80%
Last
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course
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 Commerce basically got perfect numbers of perfect almost
on
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every
categories
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category
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, on
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Pre
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Pre-course
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course
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 and Teaching
quality
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 got
same
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the same
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percentages
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 amount of 95% next
tutor
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support
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 with 93%, in
the
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apply
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printing 81%, on the
last
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course
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 in other
resources
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obtain
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obtained
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, pre, course, quality, tutor, support, resources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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