The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals for three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals for three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The present bar charts compare information about the average percentages of three different nutrients(
Sodium
, Saturated fat, and Added
sugar
) which are used more than people need and might be unhealthy in daily meals namely,
Breakfast
,
Dinner
, Lunch, and Snacks.
Overall
,
dinner
has a lot of sections of three things, so it is bad food for our body
instead
of
breakfast
which is a healthier meal.
According to
the diagrams,
dinner
is the first meal which has a large proportion of
Sodium
and Saturated fat respectively, 43 and 37 per cent except Added
sugar
by 23%. The second one is Lunch which is the same as
dinner
in trend. In there
Sodium
percentage is approximately the same as Saturated fat by less than 30 per cent;
therefore
, Added
sugar
is 10% less than other items. The third one is Snaks which has a massive figure of Added
sugar
of 42 %;
furthermore
, it has less Saturated fat and
Sodium
.
However
,
breakfast
is the healthier meal because Added
sugar
is absolutely the same as Saturated fat by 16%.
In addition
, the
sodium
of
breakfast
is equal to snakes by 14%.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • average percentages
  • typical meals
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • eaten too much
  • introduction
  • overview
  • body paragraph
  • carbohydrates
  • fats
  • proteins
  • balanced diet
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