The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals for three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The present bar charts compare information about the average percentages of three different nutrients(
Sodium
, Saturated fat, and Added sugar
) which are used more than people need and might be unhealthy in daily meals namely, Breakfast
, Dinner
, Lunch, and Snacks.
Overall
, dinner
has a lot of sections of three things, so it is bad food for our body instead
of breakfast
which is a healthier meal.
According to
the diagrams, dinner
is the first meal which has a large proportion of Sodium
and Saturated fat respectively, 43 and 37 per cent except Added sugar
by 23%. The second one is Lunch which is the same as dinner
in trend. In there Sodium
percentage is approximately the same as Saturated fat by less than 30 per cent; therefore
, Added sugar
is 10% less than other items. The third one is Snaks which has a massive figure of Added sugar
of 42 %; furthermore
, it has less Saturated fat and Sodium
.
However
, breakfast
is the healthier meal because Added sugar
is absolutely the same as Saturated fat by 16%. In addition
, the sodium
of breakfast
is equal to snakes by 14%.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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