Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear All,
Last
week I got a letter from
yours
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you
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. In that letter you mentioned a lot of
noise
coming from my flat,
thus
your families
are
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have been
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encountering
asleep
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sleep
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issues,
since
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for
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last
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the last
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two weeks.
Firstly
, my
dormitary
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dormitory
room is very old and the plumbing works
are
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have
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not completed fully, since it was built.
Hence
,
maintanence
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maintenance
of
pipeline
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the pipeline
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and
replacing
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of windows activities
are
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have been
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ongoing,
since
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for
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two weeks.
Moreover
,
plumber
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the plumber
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and electrician both of not familiar
in
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with
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their job ,
thus
the
noise
was created and during hammering time a lot of
noise
was made by them.
Additionally
, I
feel
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felt
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more worried, when I
was seen
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saw
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your letter.
Also
. I request to apologise to you all because
this
noise
has
distrupted
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disrupted
your entire family. Eventually, the
maintanence
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maintenance
works
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work
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almost
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was almost
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done.
In addition
, the workers who are working in my house
maintance
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maintenance
will come on day shift from
tommorrow
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tomorrow
and I strictly informed them don't do heavy works which
are
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is
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creating
noises
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noise
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. Best Regards John Mathew
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coherence and cohesion
Work on grammar and punctuation to ensure clarity of the message. For instance, avoid run-on sentences and misplaced commas.
coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph conveys a single idea clearly and is fully developed. This will improve readability.
task achievement
Consider using more precise vocabulary and structures to improve the overall tone of the letter. This will enhance the formal nature of your letter.
task achievement
You have adequately responded to the task by explaining the noise, apologizing, and mentioning the actions you will take.
greeting and closing
The letter opens with an appropriate greeting and closes with a polite sign-off, which effectively maintains a formal tone.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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