Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal informatoin, such as their hobbies and interests, and wheteher they are married or single. some people say tha this information may be releveant and useful. other disagree. discuss both views amd give your own opinioon

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applying

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into

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jobs. The question is, is it useful to request the

candidtants

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candidates

providing

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their personal

information

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essay, I am going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of

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side, by taking

these personal

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this personal information

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information

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account

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as hobbies and preferences, they could give the

employer

a perspective about the skills that the candidate has.

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, If one of the candidates

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drawing and painting , he or she might be creative and think in a way different from others. So that,

this

would influence the efficiency of the field that they belong to it.

Furthermore

, when the

employer

accept

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an application for one , he or she might

be

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get the insurance that the

employer

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for his employees. To illustrate, they could benefit from

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insurance in healthcare

centers

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and buying the necessary things with special discounts.

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% discount.

However

,

these

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information

when it has been seen

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effect

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on

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the privacy of the candidate. The main reason to support

this

claim is a

lots

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of people do not like to be like an open book read by anybody.

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decide

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to leave

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work. In

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, It could cost the

employer

regarding the insurance provided. In conclusion,

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personal

information

has drawbacks that

effect

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both sides which are the

applier

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applicant

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and

employer

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the employer

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.

Therefore

, I believe that

those

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that information

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information

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information is

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very useful for deciding

selection

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the selection

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of employees.