You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that i
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decide
to leave my current work and seek another opportunity, and Wrong verb form
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on your great experience.
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based
first
hand, I had to leave my current occupation Correct word choice
other
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to gain
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to that, i
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attractive
qonsequently
, I suffered each Correct your spelling
consequently
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to pay my bills.
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month
On the other hand
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that
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what
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Accordingly
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Accordingly,
i
want a job which can fulfil my Change the capitalization
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pashion
and increase my knowledge. Correct your spelling
passion
Also
get a bigger salary to Add a comma
Also,
inprove
my current standard of living. For sure any job in a financial institution will be suitable.
By the and, I hope to hear from you soon, and I will read in the back of Correct your spelling
improve
this
letter my new address and phone number so we can get contact
.
Best Regard
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in contact
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task response
The letter should clearly explain why you changed jobs, describe the new job, and include other news. Make sure each part is addressed comprehensively and clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the overall structure by ensuring each paragraph covers a single idea. Group related information together logically.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear beginning, middle, and end. Use paragraphs to separate different points to make it easier to read.
task response
You have expressed your reasons for changing jobs and the qualities you seek in your new position.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.