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The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
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The illustration shows data about the
percent
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percentage
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 of United
Kingdoms
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Kingdom
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 society giving a
donation
 to charity between 1990
to
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and
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 2010.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest
donation
 over the years was in 1990.
In addition
, it can observed that the lowest number of giving money was in ages 18-25 over the period. As shown in the illustration the
age
 of 36 to 50 was the most people who
gives
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 money at 44%, 35% in 1990 and 2010.
Also
, it is easy to see that the amount of the
donation
 for
age
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the age
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 range 51-65 in 1990
is
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was
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 the same
percent
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percentage
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 in
age
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the age
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 range 36-50 in 2010 at 35%
percent
. As the digram suggested the lowest number of
donation
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donations
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 in
british
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British
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 society was in
human
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the human
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 range 18-25 at 15%, and 5% in 1990, and 2010, respectively. The final
age
 65 was the third
ages
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age
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 that
gives
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give
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money
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the money
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 in the display period at 33%, and 35%
percent
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per cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent, donation, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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