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The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand)

The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand)
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The line graph compares the changes in the total
demand
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 for
steel
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 in the
UK
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, its production and imports from 1970 to 2000,
while
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 the second graph shows the employment figures in
this
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industry
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 during the same period.
Overall
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,
while
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 the
demand
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 for
steel
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 and the production of
steel
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 in the
UK
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 both decreased,
steel
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 imports increased. In fact, there were some people working in
this
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industry
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 between 1970 and 2000. In 1970, the total
demand
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 for
steel
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 in the
UK
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 was around 200,000, which was nearly ten times as high as the amount of
steel
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 it imported. Until the end of the graph, both the
demand
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 and the production of
steel
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 declined to about 50%,
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 the amount of
steel
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 increased significantly to around 75.000 from 10.000. The number of people employed in the
steel
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industry
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 was 50.000 in 1970 when the
demand
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 for
steel
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 in the
UK
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 was high and the amount of
steel
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 imported was low.
Then
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, the employment lines in the
steel
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industry
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 continued to decrease to around 18,000 in the year 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, steel, uk, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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