The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand)
The line graph compares the changes in the total
demand
for steel
in the UK
, its production and imports from 1970 to 2000, while
the second graph shows the employment figures in this
industry
during the same period.
Overall
, while
the demand
for steel
and the production of steel
in the UK
both decreased, steel
imports increased. In fact, there were some people working in this
industry
between 1970 and 2000.
In 1970, the total demand
for steel
in the UK
was around 200,000, which was nearly ten times as high as the amount of steel
it imported. Until the end of the graph, both the demand
and the production of steel
declined to about 50%, while
the amount of steel
increased significantly to around 75.000 from 10.000.
The number of people employed in the steel
industry
was 50.000 in 1970 when the demand
for steel
in the UK
was high and the amount of steel
imported was low. Then
, the employment lines in the steel
industry
continued to decrease to around 18,000 in the year 2000.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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