The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two
shemes
that depict Correct your spelling
schemes
themes
the
Grange Correct article usage
apply
Park
in it
first year - 1920, and nowadays. At first sight, there are many changes in the Change the pronoun
its
park
structure and features. It seems that in 1920 it was a Change noun form
park's
garden
for adults only, for relaxing, music and dates. Today
it became
a Wrong verb form
has become
neibourghood
Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
center
with car parking, Change the spelling
centre
Amphitheatre
for concerts, and Correct article usage
an Amphitheatre
children's
play area.
I'll start the Correct article usage
a children's
discribing
from the one place which stayed unchanged from the day Correct your spelling
description
park
opened until Correct article usage
the park
today
- the small and fine rose garden
from the left side of Arnold
Avenue entrance. In 1920 there Correct article usage
the Arnold
are
two more rose gardens, Wrong verb form
were
that
were moved to the Correct pronoun usage
which
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
park
, that encompass today
both a
flowers and seats. We can see that Correct article usage
apply
it's
size doubled. Replace the word
its
This
modern rose garden
was founded insted
of Correct your spelling
instead
Correct article usage
the fontain
fontain
, that Correct your spelling
fountain
erected
in the Add a missing verb
was erected
park
center
in 1920.
The cafe took Change the spelling
centre
place
of the rose Correct article usage
the place
garden
from the right side of the Arnold Avenue entrance, and beside it
we can't see a pond for water plants Add a comma
it,
today
- it's a children's playing ground instead
, in the corner of the park
.
The paramaunt
new feature in Correct your spelling
popular
modern
Add an article
the modern
park
is an amphitheatre for concerts, Fix the agreement mistake
parks
that
may Correct pronoun usage
which
conclude
many spectators, which replaced a small stage for Verb problem
attract
musisianson
Correct your spelling
musicians on
musicians
the
left side of the map.
The Change preposition
on the
last
beautiful place that is
not here today
was
the glasshouse. Now it's an awesome waterfall Wrong verb form
is
instead
, that we can see in the right corner of the park
, besides
the Eldon Change preposition
beside
street
entrance.Capitalize word
Street
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