The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
#line #percentage #tourists #england #four #attractions #brighton #summarise #information #features #comparisons #relevan
The given line graph depicts the data of the proportion of travellers to England who went to 4 different tourist attractions in Brighton.
At first glance,
it is clear that
England experienced an upward trend in Pavilion's travellers Linking Words
as well as
Pier with the exception of Linking Words
Use synonyms
Art
Correct article usage
the Art
gallery
and Festival. Notably, in 1980, Use synonyms
Festival's
data which is displayed on Correct article usage
the Festival's
chart
was the most Add an article
the chart
fascinated
place for travellers.
In 1980, Replace the word
fascinating
Pavilion
was similar to Correct article usage
the Pavilion
Use synonyms
Art
Correct article usage
the Art
Gallery
, approximately 22% and 21% respectively. The highest figure is Festival with 30% and the lowest one is Pier with 10%. The number of visitors who Use synonyms
traveled
to Change the spelling
travelled
Use synonyms
Art
Correct article usage
the Art
Gallery
witnessed an incredible increase to nearly 40% in 1985 prior to a dramatic decline to reach 8% by 2010. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Pavilion Linking Words
where
had the same traveller numbers in 1980 went up and down to reach 30% by 2010.
Especially, Festival where remained stable in the percentage of visitors lost only roughly 3% in the course of 30 Correct word choice
which
year
and reached 27% in 2010. Change to a plural noun
years
Finally
, Pier underwent a modest Linking Words
fluctuate
, surpassing Replace the word
fluctuation
Art
Use synonyms
Gallery
in 2005(14%) to be the third-highest which reached over 20% by 2010.Use synonyms
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
▼