The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
rate
of Use synonyms
internet
usage by individuals in the UK in various age groups (16-24, 25-44, 45-54, 55-64 and 65+ Use synonyms
years
old) for the period of four Use synonyms
years
, from 2003 to 2006.
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it is clear that
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years
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internet
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user
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users
year
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In addition
, the number of Linking Words
internet
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users
between the ages of 25-44 and 45-54 showed an upward trend over the period, Use synonyms
while
for the remaining age groups, the Linking Words
internet
user patterns Use synonyms
were fluctuated
.
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fluctuated
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According to
the data, young Linking Words
adults
between 16-24 Use synonyms
years
old Use synonyms
were
consistently became the highest percentage of Unnecessary verb
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internet
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users
over the four-Use synonyms
year
period. Use synonyms
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with 80% Wrong verb form
Starting
users
in both 2003 and 2004, the Use synonyms
rate
reached a peak at 100% in 2005. The proportion experienced a slight decrease, Use synonyms
however
, in the following Linking Words
year
at around 95%.
Unlike the Use synonyms
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users
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rate
in Use synonyms
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adults
, it is evident that the Use synonyms
internet
utilization for mature Use synonyms
adults
people aged between 25-44 Use synonyms
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old and 45-54 Correct your spelling
years
years
old consistently increased Use synonyms
year
by Use synonyms
year
. Both managed to hit their highest Use synonyms
rate
in 2006, at 80% altogether.
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Furthermore
, there Linking Words
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was
also
an increase of daily Linking Words
internet
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users
for the elderly people between 55-64 Use synonyms
years
old and 65+ from the Use synonyms
year
2003 to 2006, albeit at fluctuated patterns. Similar to the mature Use synonyms
adults
, elders Use synonyms
also
reached their highest percentage in 2006, at approximately 50% and 20%, respectively.Linking Words
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