The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
rate
of internet
usage by individuals in the UK in various age groups (16-24, 25-44, 45-54, 55-64 and 65+ years
old) for the period of four years
, from 2003 to 2006.
Overall
, it is clear that
individuals within
16-24 Change preposition
between
years
old are the highest proportion of internet
user
compared to the other age groups every Fix the agreement mistake
users
year
. In addition
, the number of internet
users
between the ages of 25-44 and 45-54 showed an upward trend over the period, while
for the remaining age groups, the internet
user patterns were fluctuated
.
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fluctuated
have fluctuated
According to
the data, young adults
between 16-24 years
old were
consistently became the highest percentage of Unnecessary verb
apply
internet
users
over the four-year
period. Started
with 80% Wrong verb form
Starting
users
in both 2003 and 2004, the rate
reached a peak at 100% in 2005. The proportion experienced a slight decrease, however
, in the following year
at around 95%.
Unlike the internet
users
rate
in the
young Correct article usage
apply
adults
, it is evident that the internet
utilization for mature adults
people aged between 25-44 eyars
old and 45-54 Correct your spelling
years
years
old consistently increased year
by year
. Both managed to hit their highest rate
in 2006, at 80% altogether.
Furthermore
, there were
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was
also
an increase of daily internet
users
for the elderly people between 55-64 years
old and 65+ from the year
2003 to 2006, albeit at fluctuated patterns. Similar to the mature adults
, elders also
reached their highest percentage in 2006, at approximately 50% and 20%, respectively.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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