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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.
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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of females studying universities in 5 different nations in the years 1980 and 2015 .
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it is clear that
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 Australia was the only one which had the same percentage after 35 years from 1980.
In addition
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,
the
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 number of women in South Korea almost did not have
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a chances
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chances
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 to study in high school . Looking at the figure for Australia , it was nearly unchanged at 58% between 1980 and 2015. Coming to the percentage of females going into higher school from France,
it
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began at 50% in 1980 and went up a little to 54% in 2015. Turning to the remaining statistics, a significant upward trend can be easily witnessed in South Korea, standing at 15% in 1980 and doubling after 35 years. Regarding America and England, in the year 1980, they were 38% and 35% respectively, it can
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 be seen that they both increased by 20% during the same period.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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