The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 150 words

The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 150 words
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Contained in the chart are the data related to academic professionals at university in two periods and the ratio of teachers to students in 2013 in a nation.
Overall
, the
Medicine
area had the greatest number of academicians,
while
Agriculture accounted for the lowest.
Additionally
, the amount of students educated by a teacher was highest in the Arts field. On the one hand, most lecturers undertook
Medicine
, at 30664 educators in 2005, followed by 23128 members in the Business group.
Moreover
, the disparity between the
Medicine
and the Business areas expanded to 8099 in 2013 despite the higher rise rate of the latter.
Besides
, in 2013, there were only four learners per teacher in the
Medicine
field,
whereas
an Arts lecturer undertook twelve students. For the remaining categories, most of them saw growth with the exception of Agriculture and Education. For those who
educated
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Agriculture
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, there were precisely 1680 of them in 2005,
then
declined by 2.8% to just 1633 in 2013.
In addition
, the most significant drop was found in the Education group by 3.5%.
Conversely
, the number of Architecture staff increased most across all groups, from 2380 to 3204.
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