The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The pie chart involves seven individual platforms for
content
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of
world-wide
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worldwide
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news
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by people in the year 2019 in the United Kingdom.
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,
from
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the total population of the UK, 15% had no interest in
news
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in 2019, meanwhile,
major
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occupied platform is the television with
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the invovlement
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invovlement
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involvement
of 43%. Surprisingly,
world
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word
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of mouth and radio were the least contributors
in
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world
news
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.
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, combined, the television sector and
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social media contributed more than 50% of all additions.
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, other sections of
internet
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the internet
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had 15%
watchers
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of watchers
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who
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not any definite sector to watch
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news
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the news
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.
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, mankind
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are not interested in any activities have the same contribution with 15%.
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, in 2019, 8% of total individuals had
interest
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an interest
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in
printed
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the printed
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newspaper
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newspapers
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to know about international activities.
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, radio had
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an involvement
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of 4% in total views. Meanwhile, word of mouth had
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negligible viewers in the UK with 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words news with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dominant source
  • traditional print media
  • significant number
  • considerable portion
  • least preferred
  • international news content
  • platforms
  • segment of the pie chart
  • online sources
  • audience
  • accessing news
  • popular platform
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