The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar graph illustrates the amount of
money
spent on ten different household categories
further
broken down into three
income
brackets (low, medium and high).
Overall
, most of the
money
the spent on housing
whereas
the least amount of
money
was spent on eating outside,
this
was consistent with all three
income
groups.
However
, the low and medium class spent most of their funds on everyday essentials
such
as food (at
home
), transport and utilities. The high-
income
bracket invested heavily in retirement savings. Analysing the graph
further
, the low ($15,000-25,000) and medium ($50,000- $75,000)
income
groups spent
money
on similar items with the biggest difference observed in food cooked at
home
and utilities. The former spent about 12% on food (at
home
) and two more per cent on utilities.
On the contrary
, the latter spent approximately only 8% on both these categories. With regards to the
high-incomeincome
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high-income income
bracket (above $150,000), about 16% of their funds were invested in retirement savings,
this
was closely followed by transport with one
per
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cent less. The least amount of
money
was spent on eating at
home
at only 5%. The expenditure on all the remaining categories (clothing, education, entertainment and health) stayed below 10% in all the given
income
brackets.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • income category
  • household spending
  • low-income households
  • mid-income households
  • high-income households
  • spending pattern
  • expenditure
  • trend
  • notably
  • significantly
  • on average
  • predominantly
  • essential expenses
  • disposable income
  • allocate
  • budget
  • vary
  • contrast
  • percentage
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