The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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bar graph illustrates the amount of
money
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spent on ten different household categories
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broken down into three
income
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brackets (low, medium and high).
Overall
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, most of the
money
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the spent on housing
whereas
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the least amount of
money
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was spent on eating outside,
this
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was consistent with all three
income
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groups.
However
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, the low and medium class spent most of their funds on everyday essentials
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as food (at
home
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), transport and utilities. The high-
income
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bracket invested heavily in retirement savings. Analysing the graph
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, the low ($15,000-25,000) and medium ($50,000- $75,000)
income
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groups spent
money
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on similar items with the biggest difference observed in food cooked at
home
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and utilities. The former spent about 12% on food (at
home
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) and two more per cent on utilities.
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, the latter spent approximately only 8% on both these categories. With regards to the
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high-income income
bracket (above $150,000), about 16% of their funds were invested in retirement savings,
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was closely followed by transport with one
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cent less. The least amount of
money
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was spent on eating at
home
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at only 5%. The expenditure on all the remaining categories (clothing, education, entertainment and health) stayed below 10% in all the given
income
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brackets.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, income, home with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • income category
  • household spending
  • low-income households
  • mid-income households
  • high-income households
  • spending pattern
  • expenditure
  • trend
  • notably
  • significantly
  • on average
  • predominantly
  • essential expenses
  • disposable income
  • allocate
  • budget
  • vary
  • contrast
  • percentage
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