**You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.** **Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:** - **apologise for the damage to the item** - **explain what happened** - **say how you are going to fix the issue**

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Dear Sedenam,
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hope you doing well . Thank you for inviting me over
for
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your dinner party and
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appreciate it for including me.
i
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am writing
this
letter in
regards
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to the the
printer
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borrowed from you , am sorry to let you know it got
damage
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,
however
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am
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will make sure to replace the broken part. I wanted you to know
this
in advance so that if you see a new part you would not
be surprise
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and am very sorry
this
happened. I was
priniting
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printing
some documents for school when the
printer
runned
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ran
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out of
ink
, so
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ordered some
ink
from
amazon
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. In the process of replacing the old
ink
,
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mistakenly
snaped
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snapped
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the paper drawer
haedly
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so badly
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that it got damaged. even though
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was able to change the
ink
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could not print since the paper drawer was damaged and not sensing the paper. I contacted one of my Uncles who is a computer and hardware technician,who deals in the repair of computers and
its
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accesories
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accessories
. I showed him a picture of the damaged
printer
drawer and he said he could fix it. So will be sending
th
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the
printer
to him and will bring
back
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it back
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to you when
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done. I am really sorry for the
damages
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that
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caused to your
printer
. Thanks again for lending it to me. yours friendly, Keziah.
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suitable writing tone
Avoid using informal contractions like 'am' instead of 'I am' to maintain a consistent tone.
logical structure
Ensure each paragraph covers a single idea clearly, and revise for grammatical accuracy.
complete response
The letter addresses all bullet points, ensuring a complete response.
suitable writing tone
The tone is appropriate and conveys a sense of responsibility.
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