The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance
of
the table and charts provided highlight the main resources of the police budgets and payments during the Change preposition
at
given
time 2017 to 2018 in one of the British Verb problem
apply
area
.
Change to a plural noun
areas
Overall
, the total budgets and distributions both increased from 2017 to 2018. the national government provided the most in the police budget, while
the salaries of officers and staff contributed the largest proportion as well. The taxes from locals had the largest increasing rate, while
the percentage in technological spending had rose
the most.
To probe more deeply, there was Change the verb form
risen
a
significant growth in local taxes from 91.2 million Remove the article
apply
dollars
in 2017 to 102.3 million dollars
in 2018 respectfully
. Replace the word
respectively
As for the
percentage of technological spending witnessed a huge lift up to 6% Change preposition
The
arisement
, showcasing the rising trend in awareness of technology support, Correct your spelling
agreement
as
8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018.
At the other end of the spectrum, there was a slight increase in the aforementioned Change preposition
from
of
Change preposition
apply
the
national government's financial support Correct article usage
apply
for
no more than 2.3 Change preposition
of
millions
Change to singular
million
dollars
. However
, the percentage of salaries of officers and staff met a moderate decrease for
losing around 6% Change preposition
apply
budgets
.
Change preposition
of budgets
Furthermore
, which should be particularly mentioned are the contributions from other sources likewise
the costs on
building and transport. Both numbers of them had remained stable, Change preposition
of
for instance
, compare
to other incomes, the amount of the other sources only raised up for approximately half Change the form of the verb
compared
million
Correct article usage
a million
dollars
and the proportion of building
and transport in the given time remained the same at 17%.Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
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