The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance
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the table and charts provided highlight the main resources of the police budgets and payments during the
given
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time 2017 to 2018 in one of the British
area
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.
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, the total budgets and distributions both increased from 2017 to 2018. the national government provided the most in the police budget,
while
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the salaries of officers and staff contributed the largest proportion as well. The taxes from locals had the largest increasing rate,
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the percentage in technological spending had
rose
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the most. To probe more deeply, there was
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significant growth in local taxes from 91.2 million
dollars
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in 2017 to 102.3 million
dollars
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in 2018
respectfully
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As for the
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percentage of technological spending witnessed a huge lift up to 6%
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, showcasing the rising trend in awareness of technology support,
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8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018. At the other end of the spectrum, there was a slight increase in the aforementioned
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the
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national government's financial support
for
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no more than 2.3
millions
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million
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dollars
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.
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, the percentage of salaries of officers and staff met a moderate decrease
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losing around 6%
budgets
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of budgets
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.
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, which should be particularly mentioned are the contributions from other sources
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the costs
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building and transport. Both numbers of them had remained stable,
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,
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to other incomes, the amount of the other sources only raised up for approximately half
million
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a million
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dollars
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and the proportion of
building
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and transport in the given time remained the same at 17%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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