The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of four groups of different ages, who watched the cinema in the UK between 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, the 14-24-year-old population enjoyed more movies as compared to the other
age
groups’
people
. The 44-54 aged
people
did not show more interest in movies and lowest in all the groups. The
age
from 24 to 44
years
old
people
attained some interest in watching pictures in cinemas during those
years
. It is conspicuous that the
age
group of 14-24
people
watched 36% in 1990 with a
further
movement it hit 37% in 2000 after that it rose steadily to 52% until 2010. The second highest number of
people
aged 34-44
years
who watched cinemas was 35% in 1990 with a gentle shrink to 32% in 2000 after that, it touched 33% in 2010. Probing ahead, 24-34 old cinema lovers who were 25% in 1990 and experienced a swing until 2005 reached 33% after that it plateaued at 33% until 2010.
Lastly
, the senior
age
group 44-54
years
old population, enjoyed movies 15% in 1990 with gentle variations and struck 21% in 2010.
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  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • anomaly
  • trend
  • pattern
  • attendance
  • cinema-goers
  • audience
  • peak
  • decline
  • increment
  • fluctuation
  • baseline
  • societal changes
  • technological advancements
  • external factors
  • economic conditions
  • home entertainment
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