The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts
gives
key information about Change the verb form
give
month by month
household profit spent on Add a hyphen
month-by-month
variety
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a variety
sorts
by two different groups in one European country. The units are measured by Change preposition
of sorts
persentages
.
Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the biggest share
was food, and drink. In addition
, the share
of Fuel
bill was nearly Correct article usage
the Fuel
to
the Change preposition
apply
share
of food, and drink. Moreover
, all the sorts Did not exceed 20 percent
.
it can observed that the highest Change the spelling
per cent
share
was food, and drink at 29 percent
. Furthermore
, it comes right after it
fuel bill at 24 Correct pronoun usage
its
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, Miscellaneous was the finall
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final
share
had approximately highe
percentage at 18 Correct your spelling
higher
high
percent
.
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per cent
Acoording
to what is shown restaurant, Correct your spelling
According
and
hotel and clothing are nearly to each other، where the restaurantCorrect word choice
apply
,
and hotel are 4 Remove the comma
apply
percent
and clothing is 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
recreational and culture
activities reach 11 Replace the word
cultural
pecent
and transport 9 Correct your spelling
per cent
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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