The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided line graph illustrates the proportion of kids in various types of age
group
of the youngsters in the Fix the agreement mistake
groups
UK
over an eleven-year period.
It can be clearly seen that the numbers of children under 4 Use synonyms
years
old had a downward trend.Use synonyms
However
,the Linking Words
populations
in the group of 10 to 14 Fix the agreement mistake
population
years
old witnessed a gradual upward in England over the period.
In 1990,the percentage of children aged under 4 Use synonyms
years
old was just under %26 in the Use synonyms
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.For the next two Use synonyms
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years
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years,
this
amount reached Linking Words
at
roughly %26.5 in 1992(which was the highest rate of young population over the whole year).Change preposition
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Similarly
,the number of people aged 15 to 19 Linking Words
years
old was approximately %26 and plummeted to nearly %23 in England in 1994.(Which was the lowest level of Use synonyms
youngster
over the whole period).
Surprisingly,the number of people Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
in ages
5 to 9 Change preposition
aged
years
old was roughly %25 in 1990 and It rose slightly to %26 in the Use synonyms
UK
in 1997.Next,thUse synonyms
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nt of children 5-9 Change the quantifier
number
years
old decreased modestly and Use synonyms
at the end
of the trend It was just over %25 in 2001.Linking Words
In addition
,the proportion of young people from 10 to 14 Linking Words
was
to aroChange preposition
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und
of %23 in 1990 and Correct your spelling
23
then
It experienced a slight rise and reached to peak at just over %26 in the Linking Words
UK
in 2001.Use synonyms
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