The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
As we can see on the graph of the production levels of the main kinds of
fuel
in the UK between 1981 and 2000, the most used
fuel
during
all
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this
period of time was petroleum. The
energy
units
for
this
kind of
fuel
variated
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between 90 and 140. In comparison, values of the
energy
units
of two other fuels - coal and natural
gas
, variated between 30 to 80 for coal and 40 to 100 for natural
gas
. Another information we can get from
this
graph is that the
usage
of these three
fuel
kinds changed drastically during the period. Especially for coal and natural
gas
.
At
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the year of 1981 natural
gas
was
least
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the least
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used
fuel
with the
energy
units
at about 40. But in 1991 its
usage
started to
raise
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and became more popular than coal. The use of coal at the beginning of
this
timeline was about 80
units
, but
then
in 1984 a sudden drop
happend
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happened
. After
that
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there was a slight increase in its
usage
but it has never come back to the
initail
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initial
value. Shortly before a decrease in coal
usage
in 1991 happened, there
also
was
a
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increase in petroleum
energy
units
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values.
This
probably was the reason for a sudden drop in coal production.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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