The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
As we can see on the graph of the production levels of the main kinds of
fuel
in the UK between 1981 and 2000, the most used fuel
during all
Correct determiner usage
apply
this
period of time was petroleum. The energy
units
for this
kind of fuel
variated
between 90 and 140. In comparison, values of the Verb problem
varied
energy
units
of two other fuels - coal and natural gas
, variated between 30 to 80 for coal and 40 to 100 for natural gas
. Another information we can get from this
graph is that the usage
of these three fuel
kinds changed drastically during the period. Especially for coal and natural gas
. At
the year of 1981 natural Change preposition
In
gas
was least
used Correct article usage
the least
fuel
with the energy
units
at about 40. But in 1991 its usage
started to raise
and became more popular than coal. The use of coal at the beginning of Correct your spelling
rise
this
timeline was about 80 units
, but then
in 1984 a sudden drop happend
. After Correct your spelling
happened
that
there was a slight increase in its Add a comma
that,
usage
but it has never come back to the initail
value. Shortly before a decrease in coal Correct your spelling
initial
usage
in 1991 happened, there also
was a
increase in petroleum Change the article
an
energy
units
values. Change the noun form
unit
This
probably was the reason for a sudden drop in coal production.Submitted by sofakruglova2002 on
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