The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian products exported to four nationals, Japan, the US, China, and India between 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, China imported the highest number of goods as compared to other countries.
Whereas
, Japan’s imports declined every year and India imported fewer goods from Australia. It is conspicuous that Australia exported material to China nearly 2.5% in 1990, which rose to 5% in 2000,
further
, it experienced a dramatic rise from 5% to 27% in 2012. The US imported 11% of products from Australia in 1990 and it weakened to 7% in 1995 and after
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a downward trend from 2000 to 2010 hit 5% after that it showed increment steadily and touched 6% in 2012. Probing ahead, Japan's imports started falling down from 26% in 1990 and attained 17% in 2000, after that period it plateaued to 17% between 2000 to 2005,
additionally
, it again decreased and touched 16% in 2010, and remained constant until 2012.
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, India, purchased fewer goods, only 2.5% in 1990 and it hovered until 2000 after that it indicated steady growth of 7% in 2010 and
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again declined to 5% in 2012.
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