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The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France.

The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France.
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The line graph illustrates how much domestic
waste
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 was recycled in three countries between 2005 and 2015.
France
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 recycled the largest amount of domestic
waste
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 in 2005, with 50%.
However
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, it kept a significant drop until 2013, reaching the bottom at 30% and rose in the
last
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 two years to 40%.
By contrast
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, the data for the UK and Germany were all seen as a considerably upward trend. In 2005, the percentage of recycled
waste
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 in these two countries was over 35% and 20%, situating in the second and
third,
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separately. The figure for the UK overtook that of
France
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 in 2009 with 40%, becoming the leading position among the three countries, and rose to 60% in 2015.
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, after Germany's domestic
waste
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 recycling surpassed that in
France
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 in around 2010 by over 35%, it rocketed to more than 55%.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the percentage of
waste
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 recycling in
France
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 experienced a fall,
whereas
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 the data
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 the UK and Germany showed
upward
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an upward
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 trend.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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