The chart below show the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart and table represent the comparison and trends of an identified nation's
export
in five different categories during 2015 and 2016, indicated as billions Fix the agreement mistake
exports
US
dollars and percentages respectively.
Change preposition
of US
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the earning
received from petroleum products Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
was
the highest, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
that of textiles
was the least
in both years. Correct word choice
lowest
However
, it is interesting to note that the changes in value
of Add an article
the value
textiles
in a year skyrocketed the most comparing
with Wrong verb form
compared
others
exported goods.
Correct quantifier usage
other
To begin
with, in 2015, at slighly
above $60 Correct your spelling
slightly
billion
the
petroleum products had the greatest profits from distributing goods internationally among the other four, followed by Correct article usage
apply
the
engineered goods, agricultural products and Correct article usage
apply
textiles
, at $58 billion
, at $32 billion
, and at $26 billion
,respectively. In 2016, the revenues gain
from these aforementioned categories Change the form of the verb
gained
was
surpassed except Correct subject-verb agreement
were
gems
and Change preposition
for gems
jewelly
Correct your spelling
jewellery
that
had fewer than its previous Correct pronoun usage
which
earning
about $3 Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
billion
.
In regards with
, the trends of the changes Change preposition
to
of
the profits Change preposition
in
could
be clearly seen Wrong verb form
can
on
the table, at 15.24% Change preposition
in
Textiles
make the largest gap of
earnings which was approximately 5 Change preposition
in
time
bigger than the petroleum Change to a plural noun
times
product
.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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Vocabulary: Replace the words textiles, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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