The bar chart illustrates the amount of New Zealand workers who suffered a lethal injury and passed away over the course of eighteen years from 1992 to 2010. Each column represents a thousand injury intervals for that particular year, and there are several key features that are set out below.
The diagram started with 6,217 injuries in 1992, before it gradually increased to 6.632 in 1994, which was the highest point in the entire time frame. After, it felt a slight decline, reaching 6,202 in 1996 before it rose again to 6,238 in 1997. The next two years generally consisted of a downward trend, around the 6,000 mark.
The year 2000 started
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with 5,920, reached a low at 5,534 in 2002 and grew again to 5,840 in 2006. From Replace the word
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point onwards, the graph showed a sharp fall and reached its lowest point of 4,551 in 2009. The bar chart ended with 4,690 in 2010.
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