The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The flowchart presents the manufacturing
process
of cup
instant noodles
. Overall
, the process
consists of eight stages, commencing with the flour pickup processing from the storages
and ending with packaging Fix the agreement mistake
storage
noodles
.
At the first stage
in the process
, flour as the primary ingredient of noodles
has to be provided from the storages. After that, the flour with water and oil must to
be mixed using machines. Change the verb form
apply
Furthermore
, all mixed components are rolled using another device and produce dough
sheets. Next,
all the sheets are cutted
Correct your spelling
cut
to
Change preposition
into
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
dough
strips and subsequently
rolled to be dough
rolls. It continues
with the frying Wrong verb form
continued
process
of dough
roll with oil and dried it for a moment. By this
step, raw roll noodles
has
ready to package.
Verb problem
are
The following step is
wrap-up
Correct article usage
a wrap-up
steps
using Fix the agreement mistake
step
cup
case. The Correct article usage
a cup
noodles
should be packaged in the
Correct article usage
a
cup
with vegetables and spices for seasoning. Additionally
, the cup
noodle
should be labeled and sealed before they Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
distributed
to stores. Add a missing verb
are distributed
Finally
, the cup
instant noodles
ready
for sale.Add a missing verb
are ready
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cup, noodles, dough with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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