The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The flowchart presents the manufacturing
process
of Use synonyms
cup
instant Use synonyms
noodles
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
process
consists of eight stages, commencing with the flour pickup processing from the Use synonyms
storages
and ending with packaging Fix the agreement mistake
storage
noodles
.
Use synonyms
At the first stage
in the Linking Words
process
, flour as the primary ingredient of Use synonyms
noodles
has to be provided from the storages. After that, the flour with water and oil must Use synonyms
to
be mixed using machines. Change the verb form
apply
Furthermore
, all mixed components are rolled using another device and produce Linking Words
dough
sheets. Use synonyms
Next,
all the sheets are Linking Words
cutted
Correct your spelling
cut
to
Change preposition
into
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
dough
strips and Use synonyms
subsequently
rolled to be Linking Words
dough
rolls. It Use synonyms
continues
with the frying Wrong verb form
continued
process
of Use synonyms
dough
roll with oil and dried it for a moment. By Use synonyms
this
step, raw roll Linking Words
noodles
Use synonyms
has
ready to package.
Verb problem
are
The following step is
Linking Words
wrap-up
Correct article usage
a wrap-up
steps
using Fix the agreement mistake
step
Use synonyms
cup
case. The Correct article usage
a cup
noodles
should be packaged in Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
a
cup
with vegetables and spices for seasoning. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
cup
Use synonyms
noodle
should be labeled and sealed before they Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
distributed
to stores. Add a missing verb
are distributed
Finally
, the Linking Words
cup
instant Use synonyms
noodles
Use synonyms
ready
for sale.Add a missing verb
are ready
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cup, noodles, dough with synonyms.
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