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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart depicts the proportions of Anthropology graduates from one university after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table illustrates how much money the anthropologists get in
work
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 after five years.
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, in the pie chart, the vast majority of people have full-time
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 from one university.
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, in the table chart, the largest amount of salary which is more than $100,000 is gotten in the government sector.
It is clear that
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 more than half of anthropologists
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 full-time,
while
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 5% of them have part-time
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 and postgrad study. The second proportion is part-time
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 with 15%.
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, both the rates of full-time postgrad study and the unknown segment are 8%.
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 the table, 40% of freelance consultants get $750,000-99,999 and more than $100,000. In the government sector, 50% of employees get $100,000+,
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 in private companies 35% of employees get a salary in the range of $50,000-74,999. By looking into details, both 5% of freelance consultants and the government sector get money between $25,000 and $49,999.
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, 15% of each mentioned group gets a salary in the range of $50,000-74,999.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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