The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, last year

The graph illustrates percentages amount of people who are not able to read and write by region and by gender in some

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. it can be clearly seen that male

illiteracy

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rates

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much lower than female

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, except in Developed

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and Latin America, both male and female almost has an exact

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. Developed

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became the lowest and South

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the highest

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rates

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in the

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. Starting with Developed

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countries

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illiteracy

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rates

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just only 3

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and 2

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for

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males

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, Latin America has almost an exact amount

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for

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and 11

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. In East

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, the percentages were slightly different,

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and almost tripled to 20

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.

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Africa, Arab

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and South

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similar

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for both male and female

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rates

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, males

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30, 28 and 33

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and

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has 48, 52 and 54

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, females

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world

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illiteracy

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higher than

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, and developed

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the lowest

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illiteracy

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the highest.