The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, last year
The graph illustrates percentages amount of people who are not able to read and write by region and by gender in some
year
.
it can be clearly seen that male Fix the agreement mistake
years
illiteracy
rates
is
much lower than female Change the verb form
are
rates
, except in Developed Countries
and Latin America, both male and female almost has an exact percentage
. Developed countries
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country's
countries'
region
became the lowest and South Fix the agreement mistake
regions
Asia
became
the highest Verb problem
had
illiteracy
rates
in the world
.
Starting with Developed countries
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country's
countries'
world
illiteracy
rates
just only 3 percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
female
and 2 Fix the agreement mistake
females
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
male
, Latin America has almost an exact amount Fix the agreement mistake
males
by
10 Change preposition
of
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
male
and 11 Fix the agreement mistake
males
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
female
. In East Fix the agreement mistake
females
Asia
, the percentages were slightly different, 8
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with 8
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
male
and almost tripled to 20 Fix the agreement mistake
males
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
female
.
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females
Sub-Sahara
Africa, Arab Correct your spelling
Sub-Saharan
Sates
and South Correct your spelling
States
Asia
has
a Correct subject-verb agreement
have
similiar
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similar
percentage
for both male and female illiteracy
rates
. In respectively
, males Capitalize word
Respectively
has
30, 28 and 33 Change the verb form
have
percentage
and Replace the word
per cent
female
has 48, 52 and 54 Fix the agreement mistake
females
percentage
.
Replace the word
per cent
To sum up
, females has
Change the verb form
have
world
illiteracy
rates
higher than male
, and developed Fix the agreement mistake
males
countries
is
the lowest Verb problem
have
world
illiteracy
rates
, while
South Asia
is
the highest.Verb problem
has
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rates, countries, percentage, asia, world, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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