Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The bar graph gives data about
to
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two
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households one in own and the other one in rent
accomodation
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accommodation
In
United
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the United
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Kingdom and
wales
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Wales
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from 1918 and 2011. All the units are measured by
persentages
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percentages
percentage
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the owned
householed
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household
and rented
household
have reverse pattern and that because the rented
household
was highest In the early years,
while
the owned
household
was increased in the
last
years. it is interesting to note that in 1971 the owned and rented
house
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houses
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reach
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reached
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the same
per
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percentage
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cent
at 50
persentage
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per cent
.
In addition
, the highest
per
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percentage
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cent
in the 90s was the rented households at 78 per
cent
,
nevertheless
the lowest was owned
household
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households
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at mostly 22 per
cent
.
According to
what is shown, owned
household
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households
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increased over the years from 22 per
cent
to 66 per
cent
. In 1918 the rented
house
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houses
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reach
Wrong verb form
reached
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to
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apply
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the
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a
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peak at nearly 78.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • accommodation
  • owned
  • rented
  • prevalent
  • transition period
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • summarize
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