The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.
The graph illustrates the
proportion
of families
using electronics, which are washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum
cleaners
, in a particular country over a decade from 1920 to 2019. Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion
of family usage
of each electronic equipment tended to increase, with the percentage of families
using vacuum
cleaners
and refrigerators reached
their maturity Wrong verb form
reaching
rate
as the highest in 2019 while
those who used washing machines dominated in 1920.
According to
the data, there were 30% of families
used vacuum
cleaners
at the outset of the period. The percentage gradually increased until it reached 100% as its maturity rate
in 2000, then
it plateaued until the year 2019. Similarly
, the proportion
of families
using refrigerators saw an upward trend. Starting with around 5% at the beginning of the period, the number climbed up consistently until they reached their maturity rate
in 1980, twenty years earlier than the usage
rate
of vacuum
cleaners
. Furthermore
, it remained stable until 2019.
On the other hand
, the rate
of family usage
of washing machines never reached 100%, although
the usage
rate
was the highest at the start of the period at 40%. Even though there was a slight decrease in 1980, the proportion
managed to rise to around 75% a decade later.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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