The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram illustrates the process of
cement
manufacture, and the second diagram shows the materials
that go into the production
of concrete.
It is clear that
there are five stages in the production
of cement
, beginning with the input of raw materials
and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, four different materials
are mixed together.
At the first stage
in the production
of cement
, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. This
powder is then
mixed before it passes into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and cement
is produced. Finally
, the cement
is packaged in large bags.
Cement
is one of the four raw materials
that are used in the production
of concrete, along with
gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement
and 10% water. All four materials
are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer.Submitted by writingeilts on
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