Some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local business rather than foreign businesses. To what extent do you agree? (reported 2021, 2023)

The question of whether governments should prioritize foreign

businesses

is a complex and multifaceted issue ,

while

it is vital

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local enterprises should not be ignored.I believe the balanced approach which is taken by authorities could be more beneficial to address

this

issue Encouraging foreign

businesses

is essential for some reasons. A good reason is that foreign investment leads to more innovation in

country

industries it could attract some young businessmen and women to use the advanced technologies in their careers.

Moreover

, it helps the

government

to contribute with managerial expertise which brings significant opportunities for economic growth . For

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in my

country

,Iran, some foreign businessmen opened

branch

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branches

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of gelato in Tehran and

due to

this

they provide so many job opportunities for youngsters.

Also

, they have a good collaboration with some

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intervenors

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in Iran and furthering their knowledge about the best ice creams

On the other hand

, promoting local enterprises by governments should not be overlooked. when the local business

thrive

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, it enhances the

country

's revenue which leads

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prosperity and welfare

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for local people.

For instance

,it could be the financial support for local people.

Additionally

, supporting local

businesses

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the cultural identity.

For example

, in my

country

Iran. we have significant handicrafts which represent our cultural heritage that

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could be preserved by

government

incentives.

Furthermore

, local

businesses

could reduce dependence on other incomes which leads to

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dynamic and resilient economic growth. To exemplify, in MY

country

investment in local enterprises could diminish the dependency on selling fuels as

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only

government

's income. In conclusion,

while

it is crucial for

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government

to encourage

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local

businesses

the importance of foreign should not be underestimated. A balanced approach may guarantee

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economic stability and growth , by integrating in both

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government

can ensure prosperity.