The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below illustrates Vietnamese scholars studying in three reported countries between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
,
while
an upward trend was witnessed in the USA and
France
,
Russia
experienced the opposite. Notably, the growth in the number of students studying in America was significant. In 2000,
France
was the leading destination for Vietnamese, with 3.5
million
, followed by
Russia
, with 3
million
. Despite a decrease to 2.5
million
in 2005,
this
figure grew significantly to reach 4.5
million
by 2015 after remaining unchanged for 5 years.
Similarly
,
Russia
, with 3
million
in 2000, experienced a continuous decline over a decade, hitting a low of 1.8
million
in 2010,
then
recovering to 2.5
million
in 2015. In 2000, America was the least chosen place for Vietnamese to study abroad, with just around 1.5
million
, less than half the number in
France
.
However
, the number of those opting for America increased continuously, surpassing the figure for
France
at 2.2
million
in 2006 and
Russia
at 2.5
million
in 2008, making the US the most favourable study-abroad destination with 5
million
in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, russia, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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  • Vietnamese students
  • studying abroad
  • steady increase
  • significant growth
  • comparatively
  • percentage increase
  • gap
  • narrowed
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