The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. How the Unemployed Spend their Time, UK, last year

The table shows what activities

did

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are done

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in the morning and

afternoon

by the unemployed, broken down by

men

and

women

. It is

clear

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clearly

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seen that, both

men

and

women

are more active in

morning

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the morning

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than in the

afternoon

. in the

afternoon

, they choose relaxing activities than in the morning, In the morning, both

men

and

women

did not

drinking

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drink

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, only 1% of

women

and 2% of

men

did

this

activity,

while

most of

women

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the women

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did housework by 49% and

men

did job hunting by 22%.

Moreover

, it is interesting that in the

afternoon

, most

of

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apply

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men

did a lot of things,

such

as

,

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apply

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gardening for 14%

men

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of men

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, watching a

tv

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TV

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for 13%, visiting friends and job hunting together contribute by 12%

men

,

while

most of

women

, 21% still do their housework.

To

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In

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conclusions

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conclusion

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,

this

table shows disparities

of

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in

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unemployment

do

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due

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to

spent

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spending

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their time with

men

have more variance activities than

women

, both in the morning and

afternoon