The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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the line graph and table provide information about
hours
of sunlight and temperature
per calendar year over 3 major cities
which are London
, New York
, Sydney
overall
, it is given that New York
has the most sunny hours
between
the 3 other Change preposition
among
cities
reaching 2535 hours
which is more than the
double Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
London
and 38 hours
more than Sydney
as we can see the city of Sydney starts the year by
its peak Change preposition
with
temperature
reaching roughly 26 degrees
,
before start dropping in Remove the comma
apply
march
Capitalize word
March
reaching
its lowest Correct word choice
and reaching
temperature
of 16 degrees
in mid july
as of Change the capitalization
July
Change the capitalization
January
january
both Change the capitalization
January
cities
of London
and New York
experience
low Wrong verb form
experienced
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temperatures
tempratures
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temperatures
while
dropping to 9 degrees
for London
and 6 degrees
for New York
nevertheless
, both cities
experience a significant rise in temperatures afterwards reaching their top temperatures at
Change preposition
in
Change the capitalization
July
july
Change the capitalization
July
where
Correct word choice
when
London
see a
18 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
degrees
whereas
New York
experience a temperature
of 29 degrees
before start droppingSubmitted by as.reyad on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, temperature, cities, london, york, degrees with synonyms.
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