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The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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These two charts illustrate the top five
countries
 that won the most
medals
 in
Winter
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the Winter
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Olympics
 and
Summer
Olympics
 of all time. There are quite a few differences in both graphs, the number of
medals
 that are won and the
countries
 listed in the medal winners. For
Winter
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the Winter
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Olympics
, Norway is the country with the most medal winners, they win just only approximately a little above 350
medals
;
while
 in
Summer
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the Summer
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Olympics
, The United States has won about 2500
medals
, making it
into
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apply
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the country with the most
Summer
Olympics
medals
. In
Summer
Correct article usage
the Summer
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Olympics
 chart, Norway and Canada are not in the top five
countries
 that won the most
medals
;
nevertheless
, Great Britain and France filled those positions. The units of
medals
 that are achieved by these two
Olympics
 are very different, in the Winter
Olympics
 there are only a few hundred
medals
,
on the other hand
, in the
Summer
Olympics
, there are thousands of
medals
 that are won by several
countries
. In conclusion, there are a lot of differences in medal winner standings and the number of
medals
 that are won
various
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by various
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countries
 in both
Olympics
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, medals, olympics, summer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • medal tally
  • top-performing countries
  • notable differences
  • highlight trends
  • summer vs. winter Olympics
  • significant differences
  • overall performance
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance in events
  • athletic prowess
  • statistical comparison
  • consistency in winning
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