Some people say that the government should invest in trains and subway system to prevent traffic congestion in large cities. Others, however, think it should build wider roads. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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to be provided in the several parts of the country developments.

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, it has been a controversial issue debating on the topic of whether the governments should spend their monetary

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resources

for

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supporting

transportation

system

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in the countries by focusing on

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public

transportation

in the cities area or

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the

roads

. Some may support the development of

trains

and railway

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while

some opponents may disagree.

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, after thorough consideration, though

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the road

offer

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some advantages, it is firmly believed that the benefits of the

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improvement

of the

trains

and subway

system

should not be put down by any chance. It is inarguable that

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traffic

congestion

occuring

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occurs

more often

in

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the

roads

, meaning that

one

of

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solution

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to solve

this on-going problems

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is to increase the size of the

roads

. By spending country expenditure on the

roads

could provide more space for the driving vehicles. To

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, when there are more

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for

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vehicles there will be less

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occurrence

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traffic

density in the urban area.

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, there are

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benefits

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of the railways and public

transportation

which should be taken into account.

Train

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is considered

one

of

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public

transportation

,

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by

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number of people living in the urban area.

One

of several benefits of enhancing the

system

of the

trains

,

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is that it offers more flow in

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public

transportation

.

For instance

,

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which

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there are plenty of

high quality

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trains

, there are various choices and

flow

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for people to travel to specific places by high-speed

trains

.

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could linked to

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people tend to use more public

transportation

and

this

is

one

of

ways

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the ways

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to tackle

with

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the issue of

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traffic

congestion

. To demonstrate, there

are

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less public

congestion

in the country with good public

transportation

. It can be clearly seen when comparing Japan's

traffic

congestion

to the Indian's

traffic

congestion

. In conclusion, it is true that the

traffic

density could

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by

the widen

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the road size,

nevertheless

, the real solution to the roots of the problems is to improve

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public

transportation

and encourage

of

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the

useage

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use

of the public

transportation

system

.