The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate an

island

, prior

and

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afterwards the introduction of several tourist amenities.

Overall

, it is evident that these facilities almost take up the whole

island

, with residential sites occupying most of the surface. In terms of the entrance to the

island

, a pier has been built, through which arrivals get to the

island

after being

transfered

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transferred

yaghts

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yachts

. Following the pier pathway, a reception is placed in the centre of the

island

. What's more, just to the opposite side of the reception, a restaurant has

also

been opened. Regarding hospitality amenities, two accommodation sites have been constructed, one having 6 and the other 9 houses. Notably, houses are connected together by footpath roads.

Furthermore

, the beach

at the end

side of the

island

is now capable of swimming in, and is accessible

convenientlt

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conveniently

through a footpath from the nearest

residental

Correct your spelling

residential

site.

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