The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate an

island

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, prior

and

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afterwards the introduction of several tourist amenities.

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, it is evident that these facilities almost take up the whole

island

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, with residential sites occupying most of the surface. In terms of the entrance to the

island

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, a pier has been built, through which arrivals get to the

island

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after being

transfered

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transferred

yaghts

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yachts

. Following the pier pathway, a reception is placed in the centre of the

island

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. What's more, just to the opposite side of the reception, a restaurant has

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been opened. Regarding hospitality amenities, two accommodation sites have been constructed, one having 6 and the other 9 houses. Notably, houses are connected together by footpath roads.

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, the beach

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side of the

island

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is now capable of swimming in, and is accessible

convenientlt

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conveniently

through a footpath from the nearest

residental

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residential

site.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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143 words

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the media has to right to publish detail of people’s view, while other thinks it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.