The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate an
island
, prior
and
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afterwards the introduction of several tourist amenities.
Overall
, it is evident that these facilities almost take up the whole
island
, with residential sites occupying most of the surface. In terms of the entrance to the
island
, a pier has been built, through which arrivals get to the
island
after being
transfered
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transferred
by
yaghts
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yachts
. Following the pier pathway, a reception is placed in the centre of the
island
. What's more, just to the opposite side of the reception, a restaurant has
also
been opened. Regarding hospitality amenities, two accommodation sites have been constructed, one having 6 and the other 9 houses. Notably, houses are connected together by footpath roads.
Furthermore
, the beach
at the end
side of the
island
is now capable of swimming in, and is accessible
convenientlt
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conveniently
through a footpath from the nearest
residental
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residential
site.
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