The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the number of Australian males and females who worked out regularly in six different
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groups in 2010.
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women in many
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groups were more inclined to exercise.
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, younger men did more workouts compared to the middle-aged male. The percentage of males who participated in regular physical activity was 52.8% in the
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of 15-24
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, and it decreased in the two next
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groups, becoming 39.5% in the 35-44
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, for females, the figure is the opposite, it was 47.7% in the youngest
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and it increased with ageing to a new peak of 53.3% in the 45-54
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. Interestingly, the figure for male activity increased with
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it was only 39.5%, it became 45.1% in the 55-64
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and reached 46.7% in the oldest
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, 65 and over. The percentage for females decreased slightly and fell to 47.1% in the 65 and over
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group
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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