The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates overseas
learners
admitted at Smithtown
University
,
University
of Riverview and Earlwood
University
. The unit is measured in number of students.
Overall
, Bharat was the topmost
undergraduates
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undergraduate
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admitted to Riverview
college
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College
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and
lowest
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the lowest
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scholars
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number of scholars
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were
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was
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received from the people of Columbia.
To begin
with, Indians were the topmost undergraduates admitted at Riverview
college
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College
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with approximately 7500 scholars followed by citizens of Nepal with 5000
learners
and Vietnam with 4000
learners
.
Acceptance
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The acceptance
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rate
from the people of Columbia and Indonesia hits the lowest
rate
of about 1800 and 1500 respectively.
In addition
, foreigners from Bharat
remains
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remain
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topmost
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the topmost
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undergraduates admitted at Smithtown
college
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College
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with 6000 scholars and Nepal accounted for 5000
learners
followed by Vietnam with about 4000
learners
.
Finally
, Earlwood
college
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College
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accounted
the
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for the
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lowest
acceptance
rate
from overseas schoolers with Indians, Nepal and Vietnam hitting the
overall
acceptance
rate
of about 5000,4500 and 4000
learners
respectively. Citizens from Colombia and Indonesia accounted for
fewer
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a lower
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acceptance
rate
into Earlwood
University
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words learners, university, college, acceptance, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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