Argument: Every year several languages die out. This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Language

is one of the means of communication. Some people believe that life will be easier if there are fewer

languages

in the world and some disagree with it. In

this

essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of it. I opine that having a fewer

language

will be better for easier communication.

For example

, you visited one country that speaks a

language

different than what

Correct your spelling

you

speak. Just imagine how difficult it would be. A couple of years back, I moved in from the Philippines to the Middle East and I needed to study and learn their

language

for me to fit in.

Also

, some people will not adjust for you, you are the one who needs to adjust for them,

besides

it's their country.

On the other hand

, learning many

languages

is fun and exciting. If you are a keen communicator

then

a listener it would be better if you will study different kinds of

languages

so that you can communicate with anyone anytime. And it would be a great help especially if you love travelling. In conclusion,

language

is our key to understanding each person better

as well as

listening.

However

, I believe that having fewer

languages

would be better for best communication.

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coherence cohesion

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Linking words
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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Argument: Every year several languages die out. This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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