the diagram below show how leather goods are produced

the diagram below show how leather goods are produced
The diagram shows the process through which the
leather
products are produced.
Overall
,
this
technique is comprised of eleven stages, from animal skin to fully ready-made
leather
things. The first stage is when skin taken from animals is dried. Afterwards, it is conveyed in special trucks to the plants. There the
leather
is washed in
the
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mixture of water and lime,
then
it is soaked in the chalk to bleach the raw material. In the following stage, the soaked material is flattered in a special machine and is soaked again in the blend of water and vegetable matter, which is called tannin used in
production
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the production
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of
leather
. After tanning the skin, it is sent to polish. The process of polishing is accomplished by loading the lorry with the material and sending it to the factory for
further
manufacturing. In the
plant
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plant,
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the processed material is ready for creating various things to consume in the daily life of people. The process ends with the production of different objects like
leather
shoes, bags, balls and many
other
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ones
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.
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