You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter: give details of the celebration explain the reason why you need time off suggest a way to have your work done during that time.
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing to make a request to provide me a
couple of days off from work for next month.
The reason behind my absence is I am going to London to get together for my sister's wedding. Actually, I have been waiting to attend Add the preposition
with a
this
function so
long and now I cannot resist Change preposition
for so
myslef
Correct your spelling
myself
for
attending Change preposition
from
this
event. I would
, Wrong verb form
will
therefore
, not be able to come at
work from 6th August until Change preposition
to
21th
August.
As Change the ending
21st
this
is our family function so
I am responsible for all the arrangements and Correct word choice
apply
an
important Correct article usage
apply
works
including sending invitation cards Fix the agreement mistake
work
along with
sweets to all family and friends to booking
a hall within a budget and on time.
I would really appreciate Wrong verb form
book
if
you could grant me a leave for that period. Correct pronoun usage
it if
Also
, I assure you, I
will not miss any deadlines and due dates of Correct word choice
that I
an important projects
, as I have already discussed with one of my colleagues to check my emails regularly Correct the article-noun agreement
important projects
an important project
and
Correct word choice
apply
also
feel free to contact me anytime, I will try to reach you back as soon as possible.
I look forward to you
response. Thank you in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
Amanjot Kaur.Change the pronoun
your
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grammar
There are small grammatical errors and typos present. For example, 'myslef' should be 'myself', 'an important works' should be 'important work', 'come at work' should be 'come to work', and 'to you response' should be 'to your response'.
task response
Adding more specific details regarding how your colleague will handle your tasks can make your response more convincing and thorough.
task response
You have included all the necessary information and addressed each point mentioned in the task.
writing tone
The tone of your letter is polite and formal, which is appropriate for this kind of request.
logical structure
The letter is organized and follows a logical structure, which makes it easy to read and understand.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite