The table below presents the food consumption per a person weekly in European country in 1992, 2002, and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table above shows
about
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apply
food
consumption in European country
and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
this
data taken
per Add a missing verb
was taken
a
person in 1992, 2002, and 2012. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, there are five types food
consumption by Change preposition
of food
european
, Correct your spelling
Europeans
such
as vegetable
, meat, wheat, Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
bean
, and cheese. In general, from 1992 until 2012, Fix the agreement mistake
beans
european
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European
Europeans
consume
Wrong verb form
consumed
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the vegetable
vegetable
in first rank and cheese Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
is
the lowest.
From the Wrong verb form
was
year
1992, 2002, and 2012, Fix the agreement mistake
years
vegetable
regularly increased. Start from 2140, 2190, until 2220. Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
Then
, the consumption of meat in 1992 is
1145. After that, in 2002 hit Wrong verb form
was
the
peak at 1211. Correct article usage
a
However
, in 2012 got decreased at
1132. Change preposition
to
Next,
there is wheat that
constantly increased from 837 to 977 in 2012. Correct pronoun usage
which
Moreover
, bean
stagnantly always around 500 Fix the agreement mistake
beans
grams
. Last
, cheese at 113 in 1992 also
got same
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the same
grams
in 2002 and 2012 with total
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a total
125
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of 125
grams
.
To sum up
, mostly the kind of food
that consumed
by Add a missing verb
is consumed
europe
people originally increased. Even though, there Correct your spelling
European
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
food
that have Fix the agreement mistake
foods
same
Correct article usage
the same
grams
in different year
.Fix the agreement mistake
years
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