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The charts compare the proportion of male and female students in various age groups who were engaged in full-time and part-time education in Australia in 2006.

The charts compare the proportion of male and female students in various age groups who were engaged in full-time and part-time education in Australia in 2006.
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Overall
, it is clearly indicated that in both genders, the figure for 20-24 aged
students
 engaging in full-time and part-time
education
 was the highest.
Additionally
, it is
also
 worth mentioning that
while
 part-time
education
 was more
favorable
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 for all
categories
, the reverse was true for
students
 aged 30 and above in both genders. Regarding the percentages of male and female
students
 studying part-time
education
 in Australia, the highest percentage was seen among
students
 aged 20-24 participating in part-time
education
; the percentage was responsible for 40%  for male
students
,
whereas
 that of female
students
 was 2% more than their male counterparts.
Moreover
, the percentages of male and female
students
 aged 15-19 were 12% and 17% respectively,
while
 the percentages of other
categories
 were made up fewer than 10%. When it comes to proportions of male and female
students
 studying full-time
education
 in Australia, the highest figure was seen among
students
 aged 20-24 attending full-time
education
; the proportion was made up 12%  for male
students
,
whereas
 that of female
students
 was 1% more than their male counterparts.
Furthermore
, the proportions of
students
 aged 30 and above were close to that of
students
 aged 20-24, and were lower 1-2%, in both gender
categories
.
Lastly
, the proportions of other
categories
 were responsible for fewer than 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, education, categories with synonyms.
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